superplin, posting rec at tatf, sent me. naturally, i like the way you play out all those fractals across the board.{g} the triangles change, the song remains the same.

some parts are... brittle, overreaching, like you can't find the soul inside the shiny sheen of the mad writing skillz. but you know already, i think, when you swing out too far, because i see you reeling it back in again.

writing in the surreal is a difficult and demanding form, and it's wonderful to watch you bring it off, not only with such elan but with such unholy joy (justified) in your wordy rappinghood. very, very interesting writing you're doing, technically extremely good and damned ambitious, and please don't stop those chem experiments on supersymmetry.