Well, a2zmom did say it was one of her fan fic pet peeves, but she also said it wouldn't make her hate a fic. I doubt the hated thing that used to be this chapter could've converted her, either, so no, no awe.
I have some issues with the word myself. I think it can be sexy; it definitely doesn't turn me off like it does some people. What I dislike is people using a non-canon animal impulse to replace a real "human" relationship. It's so often used as a cheap short-cut (and it is, in this fic).
A2zmom probably had enough on her hands fixing this chapter without having to deal with that, too ;o)
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Well, a2zmom did say it was one of her fan fic pet peeves, but she also said it wouldn't make her hate a fic. I doubt the hated thing that used to be this chapter could've converted her, either, so no, no awe.
I have some issues with the word myself. I think it can be sexy; it definitely doesn't turn me off like it does some people. What I dislike is people using a non-canon animal impulse to replace a real "human" relationship. It's so often used as a cheap short-cut (and it is, in this fic).
A2zmom probably had enough on her hands fixing this chapter without having to deal with that, too ;o)
I'm glad you're liking the fic.