Very nice work. Terrific Faith voice, and some beautiful grace notes throughout. I think it could use a beta -- some of the passages are repetitive, and there are sections that could be edited out to make it stronger. But overall, I loved it. Great juxtaposition of two characters travelling a narrow, winding road.
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HAHAHAHAHA! I love that episode.
Very nice work. Terrific Faith voice, and some beautiful grace notes throughout. I think it could use a beta -- some of the passages are repetitive, and there are sections that could be edited out to make it stronger. But overall, I loved it. Great juxtaposition of two characters travelling a narrow, winding road.