ext_10406 ([identity profile] luckycookie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lettered 2005-09-13 02:14 am (UTC)

This is gorgeous. I love the Faith and Angel interaction. It's always something I wanted more of on the show. I love the way you contrasted their paths to redemption.

The two of them are playing this game- they open up and close themselves off. They're so alike and looking for forgiveness even though Faith doesn't want to admit it... Gah. I really really like this.

The direct address of the reader felt strange to me for a bit at the beginning but I really like how you used it again at the end, emphasizing vulnerablility.

Both your Faith and Angel voices are great and I love that you had them pushing each other's buttons. Great fic.

(Here on a rec by ChrisleeOctaves, by the way)

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