What I like best about this story is that it *could* be a traditional boy/girl story, you know the ones where they both like each other but can't admit it and they're always sorta working at cross-purposes to each other...
The thing about B/A is there's so much passion there, and so much capacity for a consuming, strong love, that there needs to be more than a "we're not going to admit it to ourselves" if there's going to be any plot other than hot mad sex. That is, they need Obstacles, real ones--mental baggage and gypsy curses and whatnot. And then they need hot mad sex.
I haven't a leg to stand on
You sure don't! *resists tapping foot impatiently*
I'm sorry this chapter took so long. I had to rewrite it several times; it's now twice as long as it originally was. But much, much better, thanks to my lovely beta.
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The thing about B/A is there's so much passion there, and so much capacity for a consuming, strong love, that there needs to be more than a "we're not going to admit it to ourselves" if there's going to be any plot other than hot mad sex. That is, they need Obstacles, real ones--mental baggage and gypsy curses and whatnot. And then they need hot mad sex.
I haven't a leg to stand on
You sure don't! *resists tapping foot impatiently*
I'm sorry this chapter took so long. I had to rewrite it several times; it's now twice as long as it originally was. But much, much better, thanks to my lovely beta.