This is a wonderful, unfolding story. You've drawn us in very, very cleverly with your narrative, and you've given us some extremely acute observations. The characterisation is spot on. The whole thing is really creative, and, as we say in my part of the world, it's right up my street.
In fact, it's one of the best I've read for a little while.
Two tiny points. One (because it's my mission in life) - the tattoo? Not a gryphon.
The second, and much more important, because I *never* read WIPs - get more written, willya? Tap,tap,tap....
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In fact, it's one of the best I've read for a little while.
Two tiny points. One (because it's my mission in life) - the tattoo? Not a gryphon.
The second, and much more important, because I *never* read WIPs - get more written, willya? Tap,tap,tap....
:~)
Love it
Jo