This is stunning. The rhythm, the nursery rhymes quality, the haunting pictures of Reeperbahn and especially the all-knowing without comprehending (didn't River say something like that about herself, btw, now that I wrote that?) Drusilla's POV. I love your experiments with POV, like in Conceit(s), and this is especially powerful.
Who? Father? Listen. Listen—there’s only one thing that ever changes anything, and that’s death. Everything else is just a lie
And this moment - makes me go 'Yes, of course!' - it is such an Angel(us) attitude, those words, and it's amazing that I've never seen this connection made before.
Again, I say, this is an amazing story. Thank you.
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I love your experiments with POV, like in Conceit(s), and this is especially powerful.
Who? Father? Listen. Listen—there’s only one thing that ever changes anything, and that’s death. Everything else is just a lie
And this moment - makes me go 'Yes, of course!' - it is such an Angel(us) attitude, those words, and it's amazing that I've never seen this connection made before.
Again, I say, this is an amazing story. Thank you.