Hey wow, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this, because you're right--the rhythm IS jarring, and I was afraid it'd be too confusing ...and well, assault-like. I did want to try something new with how words come at you, but in some places I was unsure about how it turned out. So, thanks again!
On another note completely, hope you had a merry Christmas and a happy figgy pudding.
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On another note completely, hope you had a merry Christmas and a happy figgy pudding.