some parts are... brittle, overreaching, like you can't find the soul inside the shiny sheen of the mad writing skillz. but you know already, i think, when you swing out too far, because i see you reeling it back in again.
Thanks, but I think you give me more credit than I really deserve. You're totally right about sometimes leaving the soul out due to too much playing with the surface and the words, but I have trouble realizing I'm doing that. I did try to curb myself, but as you say, it doesn't entirely work.
I'm so glad though, that it did work for you, and that you really seemed to see what I was reaching so hard for. I keep trying to do something completely different with everything I write, and it's so wonderful when people can see that an tell me what's good about it even if I miss a little. Thanks again for your awesome fb.
PS What's tatf? I'd like to thank where I'm recced, when it's possible.
Re: carnival on the rollercoaster ride
some parts are... brittle, overreaching, like you can't find the soul inside the shiny sheen of the mad writing skillz. but you know already, i think, when you swing out too far, because i see you reeling it back in again.
Thanks, but I think you give me more credit than I really deserve. You're totally right about sometimes leaving the soul out due to too much playing with the surface and the words, but I have trouble realizing I'm doing that. I did try to curb myself, but as you say, it doesn't entirely work.
I'm so glad though, that it did work for you, and that you really seemed to see what I was reaching so hard for. I keep trying to do something completely different with everything I write, and it's so wonderful when people can see that an tell me what's good about it even if I miss a little. Thanks again for your awesome fb.
PS What's tatf? I'd like to thank where I'm recced, when it's possible.