I think this is an excellent essay which does an excellent job communicating your thoughts about writing, and about constructive criticism. I like how, in explaining how you leave concrit, you explain the purposes of that concrit and specifically how your execution fulfills your goals.
However, I think this post could have used more colons, and perhaps parallel construction. Because colons are cool.
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However, I think this post could have used more colons, and perhaps parallel construction. Because colons are cool.