Baby, if it has Spike and Angel having sex, I will read it. *g*
The story sounds interesting. When I was writing my "Five Things" piece, I actually thought of having Angel fuck Spike instead of Darla at the end of "Reprise." But I couldn't work it in 100 words. No wonder you're taking 150,000. ;)
I'd be careful, though, not to make Spike into too much of a spurned lover. His feelings for Angel are nowhere near what they are for Buffy--at least not at this point in canon. If you need a second pair of eyes, I'll volunteer.
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The story sounds interesting. When I was writing my "Five Things" piece, I actually thought of having Angel fuck Spike instead of Darla at the end of "Reprise." But I couldn't work it in 100 words. No wonder you're taking 150,000. ;)
I'd be careful, though, not to make Spike into too much of a spurned lover. His feelings for Angel are nowhere near what they are for Buffy--at least not at this point in canon. If you need a second pair of eyes, I'll volunteer.