ext_10186 ([identity profile] canadiangirl-86.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lettered 2006-08-11 06:06 pm (UTC)

This was SO fabulous and felt like such a unique story idea. It's just completely real and I love that about it.

I have to say my favourite is control. You covered both their personalities so beautifully in that short piece. They're both such goddamn stubborn, alpha characters that you know that car ain't goin' anywhere.

Seeing the two in day-to-day life is...uncomfortable in many ways. All the problems and resentments that can just creep up on someone in a relationship is unnerving, especially for two people who love each other as much as these two do. But with that last part, you brought it all back to what's really important. They love each other despite all that and that's all there is to it.

Brilliant!

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