This is really exceptional-- I love the poetry of it, particularly these--
When she opens her vein for you, she opens up an atlas. She pops and fizzles down your throat, a nervous, swirling madness. There could never be bad blood between you.
You have a way with language- in this fic you've used it, twisted it, without overdoing it. This fic feels like something I should speak out loud to truly enjoy. I love it.
My only question is, did Angel canonically drink Kate? I don't remember that, and it stands out as the one that I don't like quite as much as the others.
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When she opens her vein for you, she opens up an atlas.
She pops and fizzles down your throat, a nervous, swirling madness.
There could never be bad blood between you.
You have a way with language- in this fic you've used it, twisted it, without overdoing it. This fic feels like something I should speak out loud to truly enjoy. I love it.
My only question is, did Angel canonically drink Kate? I don't remember that, and it stands out as the one that I don't like quite as much as the others.