This fic feels like something I should speak out loud to truly enjoy.
I try to write with the sound of the words in my head. Sometimes the text itself comes out lyrical, other times it just comes out sounding stilted. I'm so glad it worked for you, here!
My only question is, did Angel canonically drink Kate? I don't remember that, and it stands out as the one that I don't like quite as much as the others.
He tasted her in S2 epi 30 "Shroud of Rahmon"; he did it to save her because he was kinda under cover. It always stuck in my mind because isn't Buffy the only other woman he drank from while in possession of a soul?
Anyway, I like that one the least as well. I thought about deleting her, but I felt there needed to be something between Buffy and Wesley for pacing issues.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for your comments! I'm still working on trying to tighten Kate's up a little, but I'm not sure how . . . meanwhile, *happy writer dance*
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I try to write with the sound of the words in my head. Sometimes the text itself comes out lyrical, other times it just comes out sounding stilted. I'm so glad it worked for you, here!
My only question is, did Angel canonically drink Kate? I don't remember that, and it stands out as the one that I don't like quite as much as the others.
He tasted her in S2 epi 30 "Shroud of Rahmon"; he did it to save her because he was kinda under cover. It always stuck in my mind because isn't Buffy the only other woman he drank from while in possession of a soul?
Anyway, I like that one the least as well. I thought about deleting her, but I felt there needed to be something between Buffy and Wesley for pacing issues.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for your comments! I'm still working on trying to tighten Kate's up a little, but I'm not sure how . . . meanwhile, *happy writer dance*