Lovely, lovely fic. (You should do more one-shots!)
I liked how the vermin one had a little twist; I thought it would be a general picture of just how low he was at that point, but then you turned it around and made it a glimpse into his true nature - tasting their fear is still better than better quality from a bag. I never would have thought of that.
Buffy's as well, lovely, and the revealing truth that it was that moment that sealed their fate as if he hadn't been really committed to it before was effective.
And Wesley's was incredibly powerful.
Would you be willing to repost this in 12monthsofbtvs before July 31? It's a community that accepts fics based on a particular character each month - July is Angel and I think they're a little lacking for submissions.
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I liked how the vermin one had a little twist; I thought it would be a general picture of just how low he was at that point, but then you turned it around and made it a glimpse into his true nature - tasting their fear is still better than better quality from a bag. I never would have thought of that.
Buffy's as well, lovely, and the revealing truth that it was that moment that sealed their fate as if he hadn't been really committed to it before was effective.
And Wesley's was incredibly powerful.
Would you be willing to repost this in