Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it. As someone who's said 'damn! I wish I wrote that!' while reading some very great writing, I'm very flattered. And thanks also for that word, "visceral." That's what I wanted this fic to be, but I wrote it so carefully that I was afraid I sometimes got too flowery (I'm a very flowery person, so it's hard for me to make my writing unflowery). Thanks again.