I love this story! It's lighthearted and fun and true to the characters. So, I devoured all thirteen chapters and now I'm afraid I'll have to hover over your journal to check for updates. :)

One little thing (of the nitpicky variety... but if you're German, these little things jump right into your eye): the German word 'Liebling' (Darling) isn't used the way it's used here; it's used only between couples, or maybe from parent to child. In this context, you could say 'mein Lieber' (my dear), which has the fitting negative, sarcastic overtone.