I'm so pleased you like it! I'm glad you think it's true to the characters...that can be so difficult in an AU.
I went and changed the "Liebling" to "mein Lieber" (capitalized, right? I'm not so good with German). I wanted it to be really creepily intimate; every once in a while someone you meet right off the bat calls you "honey" or "sweetheart"--even to men. Like Lorne! Except with Lorne it would be just weird but not skin crawly creepy. But what you say about "mein Leiber" sounds more apt in this context. Thank you for pointing that out!
I hope you don't mind if I friend you!
PS. You'll probably get two comment notifications for this; I deleted the first one because I was being even ditzier than normal.
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I went and changed the "Liebling" to "mein Lieber" (capitalized, right? I'm not so good with German). I wanted it to be really creepily intimate; every once in a while someone you meet right off the bat calls you "honey" or "sweetheart"--even to men. Like Lorne! Except with Lorne it would be just weird but not skin crawly creepy. But what you say about "mein Leiber" sounds more apt in this context. Thank you for pointing that out!
I hope you don't mind if I friend you!
PS. You'll probably get two comment notifications for this; I deleted the first one because I was being even ditzier than normal.