my_daroga: Mucha's "Dance" (spike)
my_daroga ([personal profile] my_daroga) wrote in [personal profile] lettered 2006-10-24 05:06 pm (UTC)

I don't exactly know what the second one refers too (bad fan! bad!) but I liked your experiments with 2nd person. I don't think I could read it for long, but it's a nice effect in short piece like this. I like the bags like bats line, too.
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