Yay, update!!!! You know, there's something to be said for these long, painful waits you give us between each chapter ;) When we do get one, it's like Christmas!

This was fun. I like your Buffy trying to put on an act. It was such a pain pretending to be dark and scary. - Hee. And the jolly vendor line was a big provider of 'hee's as well.

Little grammary thing that made me go "hmm": "She’d had jumped into a portal and died."

Also: hi! :)