Wow. That's some serious hot there! But what really impressed me was Nick's stream of conciousness inner monologue, just bouncing all over the place. I adore how this skips around from second to third person, from present to future conditional because our heads don't follow strict grammar principles.

I do feel a bit wistful that Dave didn't quite get it. But who knows what his inner monologue is saying? Especially with his desperate plea at the end to go get some beer, hang out, Dave might want more than Nick thinks. I think that's just brilliant.