It really did, and you wrote it beautifully. It's like an establishing shot in a movie.
the backwardness of it made me tremble in my linear boots.
Heeeeee. I know what you mean. But it worked SO well. I was sort of puzzled at first, then intrigued; and then gradually, as it all becomes clear, I felt horrified and and then filled with pathos. It's like a Greek tragedy.
You are more than welcome. You have so much talent, and I have no doubt that you will become a huge success as a professional writer. No doubt whatsoever.
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It really did, and you wrote it beautifully. It's like an establishing shot in a movie.
the backwardness of it made me tremble in my linear boots.
Heeeeee. I know what you mean. But it worked SO well. I was sort of puzzled at first, then intrigued; and then gradually, as it all becomes clear, I felt horrified and and then filled with pathos. It's like a Greek tragedy.
You are more than welcome. You have so much talent, and I have no doubt that you will become a huge success as a professional writer. No doubt whatsoever.