Oh, that's so NICE of you! I'm day 10 in the iwry ficathon, but to tell you the truth, I don't know if I dare have any one read it over, cos...it could be utterly crap and unfixable...

Vacillates...I'd love to have someone's opinion of it, but there's not time to make any big changes, because I want to send it to Chris this weekend - so bad characterisation would probably have to stay that way, rather than be wrestled into shape...if I haven't put you off, perhaps you could drop me a line at bisi_mama @ hotmail.co.uk with your contact details and I'll send it you?

And I'm keeping kvetching and getting rid of rays, so thank you!

xx