I always rec before I fb. It's a curse. That said (and having read your comment about fb making you re-evaluate) no...this works for me. Could be that my brain is a disjointed and not so linear place, but this *was* linear for me.

You've written the only Xander death scene that didn't rip me out of the story, in any case. Green Latern's Oath? I love you.

I loved the tone - and I like experimental. I love this for it's differences, for the unexpected and how the threads all come together. I loved the repeat of "All that matters is what we do." And the last lines? Yeah. Sold it.