I am lame, well for many reasons, but one of them being that I am so goddamn lazy that when femmenerd linked to this a few weeks back I actually bookmarked it to read later even though it is only 100 words long. Yay! That's like total and supreme slackerhood, yo.
Anyhoo, I have some sort of OCD about leaving feedback even if it is years later. So here goes, yay! Congratulations on completing your first drabble! 100 hundred word limit? Dude, I could never get there. It takes me like 176.5 words just to tell someone my name. You totally kicked ass, I would have never known it was your first time.
The future tense here was interesting to me. It really gave a dreamlike quality to it. I liked. "It's their turn, now. You and I," she'll recall, "we've made our beds." Ooh! I adore that flashback to the dreams of the past. Cool. I love the thought of Buffy and Faith being all older and cranky and kicking back about old times. It feels to me like all of the tension from their relationship would surely drain away as the years went on. I think they would make good gossip and 'bitch to each other' friends. Wonderful thoughts here! I really enjoyed and I'm so impressed that this is your first drabble. Congrats!
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Anyhoo, I have some sort of OCD about leaving feedback even if it is years later. So here goes, yay! Congratulations on completing your first drabble! 100 hundred word limit? Dude, I could never get there. It takes me like 176.5 words just to tell someone my name. You totally kicked ass, I would have never known it was your first time.
The future tense here was interesting to me. It really gave a dreamlike quality to it. I liked. "It's their turn, now. You and I," she'll recall, "we've made our beds." Ooh! I adore that flashback to the dreams of the past. Cool. I love the thought of Buffy and Faith being all older and cranky and kicking back about old times. It feels to me like all of the tension from their relationship would surely drain away as the years went on. I think they would make good gossip and 'bitch to each other' friends. Wonderful thoughts here! I really enjoyed and I'm so impressed that this is your first drabble. Congrats!