I can't watch vids on this comp, but that first chapter is hilarious. So like freakishly bad sf it's almost--almost--not funny. Thanks for the link!

And yeah, sometimes Bones totally plays like bad!fic. Then again, it's amazing how much just plain bad writing and bad fiction gets published, so it's no surprise it's on tv. It's why I stopped watching tv in the first place, but Buffy, it just sucked me back in. Drat.