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It's Lion Turtles all the way down ([personal profile] lettered) wrote2006-08-24 06:10 pm

Let's talk about spelling.

Let's talk about spelling.



Let's start with the orgasmic moan, because we all know that's why you clicked the cut. Except expand that to not only about moan, but all sounds made during sex. Expand that further to not only sex sounds, but any sounds made at any time that don't really have real letter representations: the moan, the groan, the grunt, the scream, the cry, the cheer, the tsk, the huff--whatever else you can think of.

1. What are your thoughts on writing out those sounds?

For instance, would you prefer to see Angel moaned Or, "Uhh," Angel moaned in text? Does it really make a difference? For me, it does. I hate to write out moans, and generally I don't like to see them because no matter how you spell them, moans don't sound like letters. Then again, in rare instances, especially in smut, a moan written out affects me more than just being told someone moaned, becuase, like dialogue, it is more immediate.

2. Now, how do you spell them?

We've got some traditional spellings: "ugh", "humph", "ah", "aw", "aiee", "uh", "mm", "harrumph", "ahem", "eh" and "oh". Are these spellings modifiable? For instance, I rarely make the sound, "Humph." It's more like a "hmph"--but dictionary.com doesn't have that. And yet, it's pretty easy to decipher my meaning and imagine the sound.

a. But what if we start more complex modifications, such as writing out a moan during sex, which is is more often "Uhhghnn" than "Uh"? Maybe "Uhhghnn" is a rather neat letter representation that you can actually relate to, but what about, "Uhhhghahhhnnnnoh!" Can you imagine that sound? Would you want to read it in a fic? At what point does it start to look stupid, rather than add an element of realism?

b. How many letters can you add to one of these words--is there a limit? I find, "Mmmmmmmmmm" to be very annoying in text, because "Mmm" conveys the meaning without looking ridiculous. But to me, that visual aspect of the text is something that can pull me right out of a fic. And anyway, do people really "Uhhhhhhhhhhhhh" for that long?

c. How do you differentiate? "Ah" can mean a sound of realization, as in "ah ha!" But it can also be soothing. "She's rubbing my back. Ahhh." Or it can be a scream. "Vampires. Ahh!" (And notice my addition of letters. Is the difference between reliation "ah" and soothing "ahh" an extra "h"? Same with "oh". There's a realization: "Oh, I get it," and a wonderment, "oooh, pretty fireworks". And I've seen people use "ugh" as an expression of disgust and a sound of pleasure. Do they really sound the same?




Now, technically the above words, such as "ugh", are interjections (any member of a class of words expressing emotion," dictionary.com). But I differentiate from noise words (the above) to words we say. (Sometimes they overlap. "Tsk", I think, can both be a sound and a word you say.) I mean words such as "yuck!", "ow!", "oops!", et al. And there's a level up of interjection from that, words that aren't exclamations, such as, "yeah".

3. Uh-huh, uh-uh. What the hell do they mean? And how do we spell them?

I hate to see these words in text. To me, "uh-huh" means an affirmative, and "uh-uh" means a negative. But I've seen people jumble them up until I don't know which is which. And yet, I use them in text too, because there's nothing quite like "uh-huh"--the laziest, most not committed, non attentive kind of affirmative. And what about "nuh-uh"?

4. whoa.

This is where it begins to get complicated. The reason I did this post is that sometimes I'm aggravated by the feeling that certain interjections are mispelled, and I want to correct people. For instance, some people spell this word, "woah" and it drives me ABSOLUTE BONKERS. Then I begin to question myself. I can't spell a moan, and to me, "hmph" is a perfectly valid thing to write in text. How do I know how to spell, "whoa"? dictionary.com has it, and does not have "woah". But this dictionary only has "whoa" in the context of when the word used to mean "stop" (as in, a command to stop a horse). It doesn't have the other more contemporary, slang usages of "whoa". Is there a right and a wrong way to spell this word? Is it, in fact, more of a noise word, with which you can take liberties without alienating readers?

5. yeah, yea, and yay.

This is my biggest pet peeve of all, and yet, I don't think I--or possibly anyone else--really has the authority to put the smackdown on those who use "yea" in a way that makes me ITCH. According to dictionary.com, "yea" is pronounce "yey"--as in, rhymes with "hay," what horses eat--as in, same word as "yay!" a word you use when you're happy to get something, or the word you use to delineate size "when I was yay big"). Now, the meaning of "yea" is yes, and back in the day, it was probably used colloquially. But nowadays, people use "yeah", pronounced as "yah", rhymes with the "ma" sound in the word "mad". But dictionary.com doesn't have that pronounciation, and who's to say how "yeah" is really spelled? I've seen "ya" (which always strikes me as ja, as in German) and "yah", both of which look wrong to me).

I could google around and try to find the "right" answer; I could examine other dictionaries, including those that some consider the "final authority" (e.g., the OED)--but I'm not interested in that so much as how it strikes you in fic/writing/text. I've seen smart people who's writing and intelligence and rudimentary knowledge of such things I respect using "yea" when I think they should be using "yeah" in great, beautiful, grammatically perfect fic. So, what gives? Should this not bother me? Do you feel there's a right or wrong answer to things like this? What do you feel that answer is?




6. Lastly, there's just something I want to throw out there about what I see as "newer" interjections. "Whoa" evolved from the "stop" command to mean something else, nowadays (though it can still mean "stop"). But are other interjections being created? I see "gah" around all the time now, and never used to. It's not in dictionary.com. And "guh".

7. What about "internet" words? What about "glomp"? Didn't "squick" evolve from internet usage? Is it weird to have a character say something like that in a fic?

8. How do you pronounce, "eh?"

[identity profile] ex-dovil323.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, what a cool post. I must admit I fall over in stitches of laughter when I see people getting a bit carried away spelling noises out. "Narrghhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!" *gasp, gasp, gasp*! There is some serious lung capacity going on there and I'm kind of surprised that the neighbours don't end up calling the cops.

I like 'gah', it's a more glottaral sounding take on the old 'ah'. See, even written noises get modernised. :D

Eh to me rhythmes with meh, which you know, sounds like eh. What?

[identity profile] stoney321.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Please to be noticing the "Ahhhuuuuaaan," Buffy replied mention. Yeah. I dont' care for it.

And honestly, I don't need to know what Angel moaned. That's too detailed. Let me imagine he's saying my name what he's doing. I don't like the camera jammed in there so close I can count pores.

I personally do NOT like to see the work "squick" in fic. It's not a real word.

Eh: Accompanied by a face (like my icon) "Uh." From a Canadian, like it's spelled.

I agree with your response on #3. (And now I back away from the 'puter for dinner is calling me!)

Well. IMO

[identity profile] kita0610.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Spelling out sex noises is adolescent writing style. Let the flames begin.

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I think fic should just have everyone ululate during sex and be done with it.

Re: Well. IMO

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Ugh!

Re: Well. IMO

[identity profile] kita0610.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Ugh is not a sex noise.

At least not if you're doing it right.

[identity profile] ex-dovil323.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahaha! This so needs to be done.

[identity profile] lostakasha.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
aiyeee

yee yee yee yee

Was it good for you?

[identity profile] anelith.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Did anyone else have the "Interjections!" song from Schoolhouse Rock going through their heads while reading this post?

I love that particular Schoolhouse Rock video above all the rest.


Also, "aiee!" is my favorite interjection. Doonesbury uses it frequently, and it always makes me laugh.
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[personal profile] rahirah 2006-08-24 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)


1. What are your thoughts on writing out those sounds? For instance, would you prefer to see Angel moaned Or, "Uhh," Angel moaned in text?

It depends on the context. I do both, though I'm more apt to just say that X moaned because I think that writing it out can look silly if it's over-used.


2. Now, how do you spell them?

Phonetically. If I want someone to moan "Ohhhwawerrowooo!" I'll have 'em moan "Ohhhwawerrowooo!" (And yea, this can look silly if take to ridiculous extremes, so...don't take it to ridiculous extremes.) I don't have any particular letter limit; I go with what looks right and won't wrap (or fail to wrap) obnoxiously. As for differentiating, if I haven't made it clear in context whether "Oh," is an "Oh" of surprise, an "oh" of "I see, that answers my question," or an "Oh" of "Some has just poked me with a sharp stick," then I've done a very poor job of writing the scene.

3. Uh-huh, uh-uh. What the hell do they mean? And how do we spell them?

Uh-huh is an affirmative. Uh-uh and nuh-uh are negatives. Anyone who says otherwise is wrong.

4. whoa.

I spell it "Whoa," but as it's used to mean far different things than "Stop, horse!" these days, I don't object unduly if it's spelled "Woah." If nothing else, I think you could make a good argument that "Whoa/woah" derives from "Wow" rather than "Whoa/stop."

5. yeah, yea, and yay.

I spell "Yeah" with an H, save on rare occasion when I spell it "Yeh," or "Yah." Whenever I use a spelling that is not "yeah," I am trying to indicate to the reader that the character is pronouncing the word in a non-standard fashion. I've never seen it spelled "yea."

I only use "Yay" if I mean "Hurray!"


6. I see "gah" around all the time now, and never used to. It's not in dictionary.com. And "guh".

I have no objection to using those words so long as we remember that they weren't current in the early years of the show–they should only be used in later and post-show fics, IMO.

7. What about "internet" words? What about "glomp"? Didn't "squick" evolve from internet usage? Is it weird to have a character say something like that in a fic?

Which character are we talking about? Angel or Wesley or Giles? Probably not. Buffy doesn't show much interest in computers. But for some characters in some time periods, sure. We know that Willow, for example, was internet-savvy and probably wrote and maybe even posted Doogie Houser fanfic. I could easily see Willow using net words (though not L33T-speak, because that would horrify her order-loving soul.) And if a story's set post-show, then it seems very likely that characters who are in their late teens or early twenties might have a passing familiarity with net jargon. I mean, hell, Dawn's probably hanging out on MySpace 24/7 like everyone else her age. And Andrew? He's a total geek.

8. How do you pronounce, "eh?"

"Eh." Take off, hoser!

Re: Well. IMO

[identity profile] regala-electra.livejournal.com 2006-08-24 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Meow. Rwor. Hisssssss.

Yeah, animal noises are HAWT
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[personal profile] rahirah 2006-08-24 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Or, you know, I use "yea" when I FORGET HOW TO TYPE.

[identity profile] 43100.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
I am insulted for the "words" you did not mention:

pah!, meh, uhm, grah, wah!

[identity profile] regala-electra.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
*dies laughing*

It would certainly make sex scenes easier to freakin' write. No longer would I be making grabbing fingers over my keypad, trying to figure out another way to say thurst and make it sound all clever and hot.

[identity profile] kaosmalek.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
I'm a spelling and grammer whore, and there are so many people in fandoms that fail to realize that spelling 'there', as in 'I will go there', as 'their' is about the most annoying thing a body could do. ...While that's beside the point, it is what your post put me in mind of.
As to orgasmic moaning: I am fairly against the practice of writing out moans. I think it's redundant. I do, however, write things like... "A sound emerged from the back of her throat; langorous and low, and capable of leaving small fires in it's wake", or, if I'm feeling less... colorful, I'll say something like, "A low sound broke from her lips, sounding somewhere between a moan and a sigh."
I generally prefer to leave the 'moaning' up to other writers, though, in it's entirety. I think a talented writer can do so much better that falling back on those old stand-in terms.

"yeah, yea, and yay."
Ooooh, these ones get on my nerves. People use them incorrectly all of the time. To my knowledge, 'yeah', pertains to a statement like, 'yeah, I understand', 'yea' is some archaic word that I'll probably never use unless I decide to write a fantasy, so I could care less about it, and 'yay' is "Yay, I won the lottery!'. If you read fanfiction, however, they all mean each other and vice versa. Hmph.

I suppose I sound like I've got my own little soapbox, and I'm never coming down... but I really think that in order to be a writer one must strive to be literate. And well-read. Well-read people find it easier to use these terms correctly simply because they see them used correctly on a regular basis.

Internet words are... well, it's a constant battle with me. I hatehatehate the whole LOL, LMFAO, ROGL thing. It drives me CRAZY. But I use 'guh' and 'gah' and things like *runs away smirking* all the time. It's my inner hypocrite coming to the surface. ;) <-- and yes, I do tend to crack out on the winking smiley face thing. Shame on me!

Laastly, I pronounce 'eh' like an old man would, saying "I'm sorry sonny, what was that? I couldn't quite make it out; my hearing is lamentable." Only, you know, simplified.
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[personal profile] lynnenne 2006-08-25 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Hahahahahaha!

WHEEEE!!!!

[identity profile] stoney321.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Interjections (Hey!) show excitement (Yow!) or emotion (Ouch!).
They're generally set apart from a sentence by an exclamation point,
Or by a comma when the feeling's not as strong.

So when you're happy (Hooray!) or sad (aw!)
Or frightened (eek!) or mad (rats!)
Or excited (Wow!) or glad (Hey!)
An interjection starts a sentence right.
lynnenne: (james huh by dead_icons)

[personal profile] lynnenne 2006-08-25 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
"Uhhhghahhhnnnnoh" sounds like someone having a bowel movement. SO not what I want to read in a sex scene.

[identity profile] kaosmalek.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
It's also incredibly possible that I should look to my own words of wisdom more often. Can you count all of the mistakes in my previous comment?
They are many. Legion, in fact.

[identity profile] dlgood.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
When Keanu says it, you write "Whoa"

When Joey Lawrence says it, you write "Woah"

[identity profile] earth-vexer.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
For instance, some people spell this word, "woah" and it drives me ABSOLUTE BONKERS.
Argh. Me too. 'Whoa,' like 'yeah' and unlike 'argh,' is a well-established word in the English language and the correct spelling is 'whoa.' No question.

Didn't "squick" evolve from internet usage? Is it weird to have a character say something like that in a fic?
It depends on the character. I think it's something Willow or maybe Buffy might say (Buffy wouldn't know it was internet-speak, though. She'd probably pick it up from Willow or maybe Andrew). It sounds kind of Jossian.

How do you pronounce, "eh?"
It depends on the context of the sentence and how Canadian I'm feeling at the moment. It's either 'eh' (like meh) to indicate indifference or whateverness or it's 'ay' in a question like "That's pretty ridiculous, eh?"

Yes, I am obsessed with spelling.

Re: WHEEEE!!!!

[identity profile] anelith.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
Interjections show excitement, or emotion,
Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Yea!

darn! That's the end.


We have the DVDs. Are we geeks or what?

Re: WHEEEE!!!!

[identity profile] stoney321.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
We do, too! The kids LOVE them.

Lolly lolly lolly get your adverbs here!

*loves*

Re: WHEEEE!!!!

[identity profile] anelith.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
Ron wanted to know if you could sing the preamble to the Constitution. I know now that the answer is YES.

We MUST get together sometime -- we are all geeks alike.

Re: WHEEEE!!!!

[identity profile] stoney321.livejournal.com 2006-08-25 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
I believe that I used that particular PSA to pass my government pop quiz, thank you.

:)

(And yes - I'd LOVE to hang with the fam!)

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