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It's Lion Turtles all the way down ([personal profile] lettered) wrote2006-12-28 09:26 pm

FICLET: Castaways

Hey! I'm still not really here! But I wanted to do a fic-I-wrote-this-year post, at like, the end of the year, and I wanted to include this little bitlet and for organizing purposes wanted it to have it's own post. So, you may or may not have already read it. It originally appeared in [livejournal.com profile] entrenous88's hot hot hot! thread, where she asked for ficlets about characters dealing with the heat. Different feeling in winter, I guess! Also, I gave it a title and edited.

Title: Castaways
Length: Short!
Rating: NC-17! Please mind.
Summary: Connor/Wesley!



Burnt and sweating, hot and tired, they could hear the ocean. “We could go in the water,” Wesley said. “Cool off.”

“Not that hot.” Voice, too young and tender, scratched like the sand on the bare boards of the abandoned boat house.

“Just for a little while.”

“I said no.”

“We could just go out,” Wesley pressed. “Sit on the shore. Better than cooped up in here, no breeze.”

“You’re that fucking hot, strip.”

“I just thought we could go in the water,” Wesley faltered.

“You want to?” Long limbs unfolding, coming toward him in a wave, the sea in his eyes. “I’ll show you.”

Hot lips on Wesley’s, coral precious in his mouth, tongue grainy and hot--made that voice like sand, Wesley remembered again. “First, sweet,” it said, sipping up the beads of sweat on Wesley’s sunburnt temple, wet and secret, like the inside of a clam, ready to snap shut, claim you and destroy you. Whisper like a seashell in his ear, “Then I call you Daddy.”

“Yes,” Wesley guttered, dry mouth, the wet and sand and heat crashing down to his crotch. Then he was turned around, slammed face first into the wall, bank of him giving into the breaker at his back. He was whimpering as his pants were pulled down past his ass, as rough, long fingers were suddenly inside him, too dry.

“I get your trust. Then I fuck you from behind.” The voice at his throat was stinging on the sunburn, small red pinches. “That’s how I get in the water.”

“I saved him,” Wesley protested.

“You didn’t save me. How about you get on that?” He’d damned him, Wesley thought, as the pain entered him, and he accepted it, welcomed it, drowned in it, this hot hell he had made for himself.

Connor might develop a tan. Wesley would always burn.

[identity profile] kita0610.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
Oh fuck.

Jesus Christ.

*whine*

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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
Thinking about those incestuous faggot heathens reminded me I'd written this! ;o)

[identity profile] kita0610.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
I'm trying to write some pseudo-incestuous faggot heathn fic myself, right now. And having some difficulty. Plot. We don't need no stinkin' plot! Meh.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 04:01 am (UTC)(link)
I'm convinced that there actually ARE no decent plots in the world. It's only pseudo incestuous? Come on, go for the whole shebang. Less plot, more incest. Yes.

[identity profile] kita0610.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 04:07 am (UTC)(link)
No, it's pseudo because it's Fred/Connor and Spike/Connor.

The Angel/Connor is coming next year.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
oh. *writhes*

Fred/Connor

I really really really love that idea. I think I've only ever seen Stoney do it.

[identity profile] kita0610.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 04:16 am (UTC)(link)
Come on AIM and I'll tell you all about it. Maybe it'll even help me write the fucking thing.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 04:23 am (UTC)(link)
oh, I signed on, but then you went away.

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Have I seen this before? Because so hot and I love Wes' guilt.

Hot lips on Wesley’s, coral precious in his mouth, tongue grainy and hot--made that voice like sand, Wesley remembered again. “First, sweet,” it said, sipping up the beads of sweat on Wesley’s sunburnt temple, wet and secret, like the inside of a clam, ready to snap shut, claim you and destroy you. Whisper like a seashell in his ear, “Then I call you Daddy.”

love the imagery here, dangerous, secretive, other - not quite human. So many layers.

I didn't have time to e-mail you yesterday. I watched a movie ("Inside Man") and then I passed out, but I had one thing planned for the long weeked - betaing BS. I think I'm finally back in the grove so going forward, expect a week or two turnaround. I think my last year of craziness and lethargy are over.

[identity profile] semby.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I was expecting hot gay porn and I got hot gay porn layered with tons of multiple meanings and symbolism! So much more than I was hoping for. This was all kinds of wow.

[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com 2006-12-29 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow!! I love how the images weave so seamlessly into the story:
Long limbs unfolding, coming toward him in a wave, the sea in his eyes.

The dynamic between them is so well done. And this is so achingly wonderful:
“You didn’t save me. How about you get on that?” He’d damned him, Wesley thought, as the pain entered him, and he accepted it, welcomed it, drowned in it, this hot hell he had made for himself.

Wonderful!

[identity profile] ares132006.livejournal.com 2006-12-30 09:19 am (UTC)(link)
“You didn’t save me. How about you get on that?” He’d damned him, Wesley thought, as the pain entered him, and he accepted it, welcomed it, drowned in it, this hot hell he had made for himself.

Connor might develop a tan. Wesley would always burn.


Oh yeah! The consequences of Wesley's not-so-wise actions.

Who better than Connor to remind him that he didn't save the baby. (Connor)

Love your use of words, babe.

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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-12-30 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, you saw it.

And thanks!

And apparently, great minds think alike! Thanks so much for beta'ing.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-12-30 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha, thanks! Apparently, I'm too embarrassed to post any porn if there isn't enough symbolism and multiple meanings behind it! I'm glad you got that from this.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-12-30 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad the images worked for you! Thanks!
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-12-30 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, there!

Yeah, Connor/Wesley just has to be so much about shame and punishment, I think.

Thanks so much for your kind words.
lynnenne: (wes lilah heroes by ?)

[personal profile] lynnenne 2006-12-31 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
This was fantastic. coral precious in his mouth, tongue grainy and hot Inventive, fabulous imagery. This is the kind of playing with language that you do best.

Happy New Year!

[identity profile] stretfordditto.livejournal.com 2007-01-01 09:47 am (UTC)(link)
Excellent. There just aren't enough Connor fics. :(
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2007-01-02 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, thanks! I was a little worried about TOO much imagery . . . so thanks!

Happy New Years to you too, hon! I'm emailing you right now. Well, after this ;o)
my_daroga: Peter O'Toole in Lawrence of Arabia (lawrence)

[personal profile] my_daroga 2007-01-03 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Short and deadly. Man.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2007-02-02 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! I think I replied to your comment and then lj ate it or something . . . because far be it from me to say "hear hear!" when someone says there aren't enough Connor fics.

Thanks, chica.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2007-02-02 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
I replied to this last month and lj ate it and I only now noticed.

Thanks, K.