It didn't read like something written that way--the characters and plots were very cohesive and threads were there from the beginning that only tangled together later.
Eeeee! That reason isn't mad! When I was reading it I really started to think it should be an original work. Your Vince is such a compelling and *different* character; he's someone who should be explored. BUT he should still look like VK, so make sure you tell the blockbuster casting director or naughty illustrator that. ;o)
rum, or coffee toffee chocolate cake. Or biscotti! I want to cook and I'm on a healthy eating plan. The two do not mix evenly until the batter is light and fluffy.
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Eeeee! That reason isn't mad! When I was reading it I really started to think it should be an original work. Your Vince is such a compelling and *different* character; he's someone who should be explored. BUT he should still look like VK, so make sure you tell the blockbuster casting director or naughty illustrator that. ;o)
rum, or coffee toffee chocolate cake. Or biscotti! I want to cook and I'm on a healthy eating plan. The two do not mix evenly until the batter is light and fluffy.