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It's Lion Turtles all the way down ([personal profile] lettered) wrote2007-05-23 12:29 am

FICLET: Reprise

GUYS. [livejournal.com profile] rahirah wrote B/A. The internets are going to implode. Spuffy fen will disown her. Get me a bowl of ice cream as I watch apocalypse. And post Spuffy smut (she called me out).

Reprise
Spuffy, NC-17, post NFA, snippet


Well there's grace, and then there's grace, and then there's fire. Spike thinks this might be all three, because his hand is fisted in her hair, her thighs are open over his, and she keeps taking him higher. The mutilation she rewarded with a kiss, the sensational spark that was supposed to make him man again, the final revelation in which he became her burning brand--he hadn't done it to give her anything. Not her sister, not his soul, not some peace of mind at the end when it was too late. He'd done it for himself; he was thieving definition from the flames. He was doing it again in her. In her tight, wet spaces, mouth and cunt; in his fingers finding the hollows along her scapula, the crevice down her ass; in the way she touched his face, knowingly. It was the same.

"I love you." It was a breath she dragged by his ear, a feminine grunt and a demand. He began to fall apart. "No," she said; she held him down and fucked him. "You're coming with me. I mean it this time. I really do."

He knew that that was true, because she was burning too. They would be destroyed, conquered, nothing at the end of it, and bigger, stronger, more themselves because of it.

[identity profile] kita0610.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
You give pretty pretty words, miss.

I wish it wasn't Spuffy.
ext_7262: (spike/buffy_spuffy_destroyer of worlds b)

[identity profile] femmenerd.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 05:42 am (UTC)(link)
I...did not expect to ever be seeing this.

Lovely, dense. Mmmmm.

P.S. Because you care about such things: "he was theiving thieving definition from the flames.

[identity profile] ex-dovil323.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 05:42 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely, lovely words, with the lovely sentences and the lovely sentiments. Oh god, I liked this one to!

I'm running round in circles all confused by all this shipper swapping, it's just not natural, haha!
elisi: Edwin holding a tiny snowman (it was only TEH SEX by crackers4jenn.)

[personal profile] elisi 2007-05-23 06:09 am (UTC)(link)
Wow.
ext_2333: "That's right,  people, I am a constant surprise." (celebration)

[identity profile] makd.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
Son of gun!! (or maybe, Gunn)

anyway- you write great S/B. (which I'm not surprised....)

thanks!

[identity profile] canadiangirl-86.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 07:05 am (UTC)(link)
It's funny, the more distance I have from Buffy fandom the more open I think I've become to other pairings. I'm starting to fear for my sanity. And you, missy, are not helping with this!

Seriously, gorgeous work. You certainly have a way with words. It's poetic, with even a touch of that characteristic Spuffy humour towards the end.

[identity profile] colour-me-troll.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 10:09 am (UTC)(link)
That was just beautifully artsy.
And I know beautifully artsy. (Sorta)
And that was it.

[identity profile] mabus101.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
If only I could join in with this meme...but I'm not a shipper!

I normally like longer fics, but the imagery in this is just...neat! ;)

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 12:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Really gorgeous. I love the them of burning here, because Spike has burned for her for a long time (even if much of it was unhealthy). The thought that she burns for him also now is beautiful.

Now back to my regularly scheduled B/A. (I have to fins time to read your Angel/Puppy otp! Stupid work).

[identity profile] amavel-bel.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is just... so intense and beautiful... Marvelous job!!!

;-)
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[personal profile] rahirah 2007-05-23 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
::loves::

Ya done good. *g*

[identity profile] anelith.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I still like good Spuffy, and this is it. Beautiful, in fact.

[identity profile] aamah.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Brilliant and oh so hot!
Now tell the truth, you are a closet Spuffy...

[identity profile] diachrony.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 03:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, that was just ... so gorgeous. And very Spuffy.

I love it when people can do right by a pairing they don't ship!

[identity profile] lostakasha.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 03:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*shakes all over* I read Spuffy because you wrote it. You eval, eval, eval thing. It burns, it burns! *hisses, claws unsheathed* damn you! that was so friggin' hot!

[identity profile] cindergal.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
That was just gorgeous, and I love the fire imagery. You have the official S/B shipper seal of approval. ;-)

[identity profile] petzipellepingo.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
He knew that that was true, because she was burning too. They would be destroyed, conquered, nothing at the end of it, and bigger, stronger, more themselves because of it.

That's my couple "sigh". Excellent job.
herself_nyc: (Default)

[personal profile] herself_nyc 2007-05-23 07:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. I LOVE it.
gillo: (dreaming)

[personal profile] gillo 2007-05-23 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Here via half my (Spuffilicious) flist. I'm impressed by this, since it's so far from your instincts. Lovely fire imagery and a real sense of connection.

[identity profile] madam-rptr.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 08:27 pm (UTC)(link)
::big fucking sigh of breath-y satisfaction::

Thank you, [livejournal.com profile] elisi for the link.
lynnenne: (spike put your hands by deadwillwalk)

[personal profile] lynnenne 2007-05-23 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice!

[identity profile] stultiloquentia.livejournal.com 2007-05-23 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
You...you...HEEEEE! Very intense, lovely imagery.

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