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It's Lion Turtles all the way down ([personal profile] lettered) wrote2008-05-27 08:30 pm

Drabble: Doctor Who/Buffy the Vampire Slayer

Title: Dangerous Angels
Summary: Buffy Summers and Martha Jones, aka BIG DAMN HEROES.
A/N: Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] seraphcelene for the prompt.



Dangerous Angels

Blood, a blink, brings to life still statues: pillars of faith, gargoyles of fable. They were everything that wasn’t, that could never be, friezes of fantasy. Now, unfrozen, they kill dreams with proof.

You think you fight for truth, but every proof of reality, realer than it was before, is your enemy. Your true champion is lies, lies that children may lie in bed and close their eyes, dreaming Hell-demons and Masters of evil are only real in slumber.

You save the world so they may forget.

Tell loved ones to close their eyes.

To yourself you say, don’t blink.
rahirah: (Default)

[personal profile] rahirah 2008-05-28 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
This is pretty awesome.
seraphcelene: (it mocks me by vamptastica)

[personal profile] seraphcelene 2008-05-28 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
Okay. Made of win. Dude, way to go with the pressure!!

This was awesome. I love the repetition and the layers. It reminds me very much of call and response. Loved the phrase "gargoyles of fable" and the line "You save the world so they may forget."

Lovely, lovely, lovely!
my_daroga: Mucha's "Dance" (doctor who)

[personal profile] my_daroga 2008-05-28 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
Aces. Really, I never thought of the connection, but it's totally apt and now makes so much sense. And an excellent theme, that the biggest things you fight against are the things that no one's ever going to thank you for, because the whole point is that you kept them from happening.
elisi: Edwin and Charles (Buffy - Hell will choke on me by stormwr)

[personal profile] elisi 2008-05-28 06:59 am (UTC)(link)
You save the world so they may forget.
That is a stunning line.

Thank you for such a treat!
lynnenne: (buffy big damn hero)

[personal profile] lynnenne 2008-05-28 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautifully done, especially this:

Your true champion is lies, lies that children may lie in bed and close their eyes, dreaming Hell-demons and Masters of evil are only real in slumber.

Gorgeous language and imagery.

lafemmedarla: (ats/btvs/tw. angel/jack big damn heroes.)

[personal profile] lafemmedarla 2008-05-28 05:45 pm (UTC)(link)
That was beautiful.

[identity profile] diachrony.livejournal.com 2008-05-28 05:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Just wonderful. I entirely loved it!

[identity profile] astrothsknot.livejournal.com 2008-05-28 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Goddamn that was poetic. A wonder snapshot of those two heroines

[identity profile] shinodabear.livejournal.com 2008-05-28 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautifully written. Just lovely.

[identity profile] stultiloquentia.livejournal.com 2008-05-28 07:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Tell loved ones to close their eyes.
To yourself you say, don’t blink.


You write killer last lines. It's all in the rhythm.
ext_7299: (Dr. Who: Martha)

[identity profile] redbrickrose.livejournal.com 2008-05-28 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
This is just gorgeous.

[identity profile] essie007.livejournal.com 2008-05-28 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
"Don't blink." I melt. I never have anything coherent to say about your work because you make me squee in incoherent thinky thoughts. You should do more writings, because they are made of win. Oh and also: Sally Sparrow!

[identity profile] spikendru.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 01:00 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, well done! I never realized how much Martha and Buffy have in common. Lovely!

[identity profile] ares132006.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 08:44 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely imagery. Loved Blink, loved how you drew me back to consider both heroines.