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It's Lion Turtles all the way down ([personal profile] lettered) wrote2008-05-28 05:28 pm

Drabble: HP - Ginny

Title: Maiden, Mother, Crone
Summary: Ginny, epilogue compliant
Wordcount: 100!
A/N: [livejournal.com profile] seraphcelene and I are playing a game. She gives me a prompt, I drabble; I give her a prompt; she drabbles. And so on. You can see her last drabble here. Her prompt this time was: and she loves me, she's waiting for me


Maiden, Mother, Crone

Once, when the basilisk took her, she lay, lady-in-waiting for her knight to slay the serpent, save her with his sword. Later, she still waited, sleeping beauty in the castle while he fought in the war.

Later, still, he saved/slayed her with his sword; she shed the skin of maid. Remade, she bore his children; their birth brought forth the mother. She’d be killed for them, as Harry’s was for him. She’d kill for them, as hers did for her.

One day she’ll be the one her mother killed, who lived, breathed, served, died for one man.

She’s just waiting.

[identity profile] essie007.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 12:55 am (UTC)(link)
This is an excellent game. It brings writing. I muchly approve.

And this *sigh* you know I have a weakness for Ginny. You've really captured her mythological femaleness here. I hope that made sense.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
Mythological femaleness is what I was going for!

Thanks ever so :o)
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[identity profile] femmenerd.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 05:22 am (UTC)(link)
Ack ack! Okay, I'm torn between admiring your wordsmithing and feeling depressed about this version of Ginny.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 06:45 am (UTC)(link)
This version of Ginny depresses me too. However, it's all I saw in DH.

Which pretty much made me a Draco/Harry shipper for life.
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I am tired and totally rambling out of my head!!!!!

[personal profile] seraphcelene 2008-05-29 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
There's something disturbingly disjointed about the last four lines. I love the tension between the passive and active visions of Ginny. You've done a wonderful job of encapsulating Rowling's schizophrenic renderings of female agency in the source text. Narcissa, Ginny, Cho always kinda read to me as trophies. Sometimes Ginny was such an add-on to me. Here is the hero's girl, especially post-Cho. Next to, I hesitate to say hyper-active females -- Hermione, Bellatrix, Macgonnall, even Mrs. Dursley. So, basically, in all that rambling. I love when I get to read a very nuanced Ginny, which you've done here and in the Green Eyes fic.

And for some reason, I read "save her with his sword" as literally Harry saving her with the sword of Godric Gryffindor, but also as Harry saving her with his "sword" like as a metaphor for his sex. I don't know where my head is! I've been over thinking everything of late, which makes writing nigh onto impossible. So, this read very academically for me.
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Re: I am tired and totally rambling out of my head!!!!!

[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 06:44 am (UTC)(link)
Rowling's schizophrenic renderings of female agency in the source text.
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Next to, I hesitate to say hyper-active females


Wow, fascinating! I never thought to group them like that, but it's absolutely true. In some senses JKR really just isn't that creative/nuanced of a writer. And in some senses, I think that's why she hit so many chords with so many different people. Those are both two really clear archetypes you point out very well (the active and the passive females, I mean).

" as literally Harry saving her with the sword of Godric Gryffindor, but also as Harry saving her with his "sword" like as a metaphor for his sex.

Er, it was supposed to be both. The line is repeated so that the first time it can mean literal sword and next time can mean cock. There's a lot of Freudian subconscious stuff in Chamber of Secrets I really could've elaborated on. I read this book once that was a retelling of Sleeping Beauty, except it retold the story again and again and a lot of it had to do with Briar Rose dreaming of/wishing for/fearing "awakening", with awakening representational of course of intercourse. Add the snakes in HP and you've got so many places to go!

Thanks for rambling out of your head. It all made sense to me!
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Re: I am tired and totally rambling out of my head!!!!!

[personal profile] seraphcelene 2008-05-30 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad that wasn't me, totally over thinking cause I wouldn't be surprised and you know it's always about drugs and money unless it's about sex. (Btw, that's totally an in-joke between me and my baby brother and there is NO reason that it should make any kind of real sense.)

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[personal profile] my_daroga 2008-05-29 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Everyone already said stuff cooler than me. But as depressing as it is, I do like hearing about Ginny. And I can totally see why this is what you saw. That was always such a depressing aspects of all this--her invisibility.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2008-05-30 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah. She is depressing. :o(

I still love that icon.