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It's Lion Turtles all the way down ([personal profile] lettered) wrote2006-03-03 02:15 pm

Let's talk about authorial intent.

I've got questions about authorial intent...



I write two types of fanfic, and each fulfills a need of mine. They are:

1. The fic that focuses on story, and that I write
-for fun.
-for escape.
-because it poured out of me.
-because something could've been better in canon and I wanted to fix it.
-because something was missing in canon and I wanted to fill it in.
-because canon was perfect, and I just wanted more.
-because I wanted to see what happened after the end.
-and come up with Best Souvenir, a shippy, plotty, epic, with a style that does not call attention to itself.

2. The fic that focuses on form, and that I write
-for intellectual stimulation.
-to become a better writer.
-to experiment with style and techniques through a medium in which I feel less disappointed about messing up (as opposed to original fiction).
-to express how I feel about canon.
-to express insights on theme, motivation, fractals, and interrelationships between characters in canon
-and come up with Five Ways NFA Probably Didn't End, a non-linear, technically experimental, containing dense language, and generally shorter fic.

For me, the difference between these two types of fics is very clear-cut. I do want those of type #1 to be the best they can be--I get them beta'ed by a wonderful gal who beats me over the head when I need it, and work hard to make the players interesting and in character. And I do want those of type #2 to be fun, to give me more of canon, to show things that could've happened.

But the difference is the intent. I set out writing Best Souvenir (type #1) because I wanted to see what would've happened if post "Chosen" Buffy met Angel. I set out writing Blood Types (type #2) because I wanted to see how a theme could illuminate Angel and his interrelationship with others through metaphor. I set out writing type #1 because I want a good story. I set out writing type #2 because I want good writing and thinky thoughts. The two aren't mutually exclusive, but how I approach them is different.

I've read some wonderful fics that my guess is are type #1, and the same for #2. I enjoy both equally, though they push really, really different buttons. But most of the great fic I see seems to be a combination of both: good stories, with interesting scenes that give me more of what could've happened in canon, expanding on characters I love and making me feel good having more of them, but also--finding new ways to use words, new ways to express things, tweaking the "rules" a bit and experimenting.

Then there are fics that are neither, and we call those crack!fics. Some crack!fic, I honestly don't understand why people write. But some crack!fic has shades of type #1--it's fun, entertaing, escapist, but the material extended and filled in and played with is fandom, not canon. The intent there, of course, is not to tell a good story, but to tell a good joke. And some fics we call crack have shades of type #2--Angel may be a crack!h0r and Spike may be a wealthy orphan monk--but it's technically brilliant: a unique use of second person, lyric language that needs to be published, omg, and thoughtful and insightful, wow. And while the premise is ridiculous, the intent is not a joke, but a good story.

(Which is why, I think, there's so much confusion/contention surrounding the term "crack!fic". There's a little blurring, between the latter kind of crack!fic and the former, and do you as an author think about which you're setting out to do when you start? And sometimes there's a blur between the latter and what we'd call "serious" fic--do you know when you're writing Buffy!prisongaurd/Faith!convict that it's crack, or is it not crack for you because you bring in real character traits of both Buffy and Faith to the table, and at which point did it become serious for you as opposed to crack? And how did your approach to it change?)

I'm also interested in the intent behind some of the one-shots written in only a couple hours, for requests, or on a whim, just to get the idea off their heads. A bunch of not-so-great fic authors write this as their standard fare, but I've seen splendid fic authors do it, and I'm wondering what their intent is. Or rather, I know what the intent is: to have fun, to er, shoot off, in a way, just to get the idea off their heads (or that thing off their faces. You know, that thing? Has no one else ever noticed the thing?) But what I'm wondering about is the approach; do the--as I mentioned, some of them really fantastic--authors who do this know when they sit down to write that such and such piece is just going to be a fly-by, a by-blow, a blow-off, an off-shoot (how long can I keep that up, huh?) Do they know it's not going to be a masterpiece? And if they do, do they still expect it to be good? Do they want people to enjoy it and leave them fb? Do they think about that when they're writing? And when they sit down to write something really serious and really important to them, do they actually sit down to write with a different attitude?

What I want to know, I guess, is: what's your intent when you sit down to write a fic? Do you have very different intents for different types of fics? Do you want to write a masterpiece every time you start out to write a piece? Or do you just plan on trying your very best every time? Or do you start out knowing it's just going to be a little doodle in your sketch pad you might show off a bit? At what point do you know that doodle might become a masterpiece, and then how does your attitude toward writing it change?

Also: what about your expectations of fb in respect to your intent? If you plan to try really hard, write as close as you personally can get to a masterpiece, do you expect/want more fb? If you only spend a couple hours or days on a fic that you started on a whim, and don't get a beta for it, are you disappointed when there isn't fb? Are you disappointed when the whim-doodle (that should be a word) fics get more fb than the ones you tried to make perfect as possible?

And how do you delineate the difference to your readers? Do you warn them in your A/N that hey, you didn't get this beta'ed? Or hey, I worked my ass off on this and I think it's the best thing I've ever done? And do you expect people to respond accordingly?


Anybody got an opinion on this type of thing?

*puts on tea* *gets you a cozie*

[identity profile] lillianmorgan.livejournal.com 2006-03-05 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for your thoughts. I always find them interesting, even if sometimes I don't agree with you.
I have a long and indeterminate fear of WIPs, mainly because I fear and have witnessed first hand how difficult it is to maintain them. Also I have so many ideas that to write chapter based fics for all those ideas would serioulsy and absolutely kill me.
Definitely my favourite type of fic is what you've expressed in # 2, but that tends to be rare (at least in my reading). And so I do tend to see more #1. However, as fic-writing is based on a text that everyone tends to have a good understanding of, as in the shows, (like how it's all going to end) sometimes the wonderful thing about #1 is the insights authors bring into characters, that were there all along in the show, but I never saw them.
When I sit down to write something, it's usually with a purpose that is fanon related. So I wrote my winter_of_wes piece because I wasn't seeing any W/L. I wrote my last seasonal_spuffy because I was reading too many post-NFA stories, so mine was set in Season 6. I wrote my summer_of_spike piece because I was seeing too many battles going on between S/B shippers and S/A shippers, so mine was an attempt to tackle both of those 'ships.
I also like to experiment, which is I guess why I like #2. But I also like to experiment with character too. Writing a range of characters is exciting for me, because it gives me an insight into why they did what they did in canon. So a short off-the-piece thing is something more for me - why did Darla approach Connor is Season 4? what was Faith feeling in Chosen? It also allows me to explore a character, their motives, a scene in canon that I may be able to pick up in a later fic.
or is it not crack for you because you bring in real character traits of both Buffy and Faith to the table, and at which point did it become serious for you as opposed to crack?
I think this is a very good point. Not all supposed 'crack!fic' is bad, there are quite a few that do tend to push the boundaries of experimentation. One of the most popular, and well-written, fics in the fandom last year [livejournal.com profile] toobusy2write's Bent Justice, was pretty much what you described. And it was just like crack because as a reader, you couldn't put it down, you were gagging for the next update.
Also: what about your expectations of fb in respect to your intent?
I always have very limited expectations on this, which I guess says more about my personality than anything else. Though it's very hard to predict the way of the fb. One thing I love is to get feedback from someone whose ideas I have thoroughly enjoyed and who has already given me enjoyment from their work. Another thing is when I get a connection from someone, a question or a debate. You know, when someone just writes 'Good job', I guess I wonder what I should have done to get them thinking about the fic.
Though, I guess, if I were to suggest trying to understand it, writing threesome fic does tend to produce the most audiences *g*
I prattled on too long didn't I? Sorry for that!
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-03-05 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for your thoughts. I always find them interesting, even if sometimes I don't agree with you.

And thank you back! The world wouldn't be such a great place if everyone agreed with me all the time!

Definitely my favourite type of fic is what you've expressed in # 2,

This is so fascinating. As I said, my shorter fics are much more of a type #2, and quite a few writers start out giving me fb by saying: "I prefer stories with more plot and dialogue without such a focus on style, but..." (then they go on to say nice things. I'm not complaining about my fb here, it's always been awesome!)

sometimes the wonderful thing about #1 is the insights authors bring into characters, that were there all along in the show, but I never saw them.

To me, a type 1 really can give a lot of insights into the character. But what I've noticed in my own writing is that my type 1 fics more often deal with insights into the characters most people will see by just watching the show. They find new ways of causing the themes and attributes we instinctively connect with the characters. But for me, type 2 is really the venue for drawing the connections that I see, but you may not (and vice versa); it's the place for showing something like...how Dawn exploring her identity as the "Key" parallels a woman exploring her sexual identity, how a key and a portal can be a play on ... interlocking sex parts, and...wacky stuff like that.

When I sit down to write something, it's usually with a purpose that is fanon related.

This is really interesting, and something I didn't think to include in my questions about intent. I tend to do the same thing--say hey! No one's writing this or that! And then I go write it. Sometimes, though it deal with theme, instead of timeframe or characters; sometimes it deals with style; sometimes it deals with particular what if questions, etc.

One of the most popular, and well-written, fics in the fandom last year toobusy2write's Bent Justice, was pretty much what you described.

I was sooo thinking of that fic when I was saying that! I didn't mention it explicitly because a. I haven't left fb for it yet (still, omg), and b. I didn't know whether she'd appreciate the label "crack!fic". To me, it's completely crack, because of the concept. But she brings SO much of the characters to the fic, and it's SO well written, it doesn't deserve the negative association crack!fic gets sometimes.

You know, when someone just writes 'Good job', I guess I wonder what I should have done to get them thinking about the fic.

Me too. I always try to point out *why* I liked a fic when I fb.

I prattled on too long didn't I? Sorry for that!

Please don't apologize--I'm extremely interested in your thoughts, because you always have good ones. And...it must be obvious by now that I ramble something fierce, so no worries!