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It's Lion Turtles all the way down ([personal profile] lettered) wrote2006-10-21 03:45 am

Might've kinda written a BSG fic. Oops.


And ye shall hear of wars and rumours of wars: see that ye be not troubled: for all these things must come to pass, but the end is not yet. ~ Matthew, 24:6


~Tigh~


He believed in her, in the dream of life together. Her betrayal came with kisses, but he never stopped believing. He led her to her last supper, and there she drank of him: duty, everything that is Colonel Tigh. He washed away her sins, and she laid down to die. Lover, passed from his arms. After that, he would drink no more wine, until the day that he should drink again with her.

Tigh went to the men, standing by, and said, Soldiers, to arms.

~Gaeta~


He believed in Gaius, in the dream of New Caprica. The President’s betrayal came with booze, pills, hot and cold blooded interns, thirty pieces of silver. Gaeta raised his firearm, to blow away his sins, but down the barrel saw hope again. Redemption passed out of his hands as Gaeta pried his finger from the trigger, and Gaius ran. After that, Laura Roslin would come in, seat herself, rest her hands upon the armrests. Then, the real hope would begin.

Gaeta went back with Tigh to the Galactica. Two fools for love and traitors to lost causes.

~Gaius~


He didn’t believe in anyone, not even himself, and betrayal always came with a leggy blonde; sometimes, he came more than once; she gave his cock that stamina. Gaius didn’t believe in her either, though. The only real one was unreal in his head, like the shape of things to come. Until in his arms he saw the face of it, their child. After that, he would still see cradles behind his eyes.

Hera passed out of his hands. Six and Sharon’s womb might be strong enough to bear faith, but Gaius was not.

~D’Anna~


She had never believed as Six did. She never knelt before a nuclear warhead. Nor had she ever knelt, unzipping her dress, asking a human man to stay with her, to rocket himself inside of her, the ricochet of her goodbye a radioactive orgasm felt a lightyear away. D’Anna’s explosion would only have blown away the sins of Cylon delusion. But she raised a child in her hands, and through the holes in her heart duty had made, saw hope.

In the end, she was just another fool for love. She walked away without a thought for nuclear arms.

~Adama~


He had never really believed they were going to win. It had been an honor—because he did believe in duty, and in dying. Adama welcomed annihilation with open arms, because the hope of it had been worth it. Until through all the mess on DREDIS, he saw the shape of Pegasus coming. After that, Adama closed his eyes. Sometimes, behind his lids, he saw himself picking Lee out of the cradle to hold him.

Adama, just like D’Anna, traded embracing destruction for the love of children.

~Kara~


She never believed in him, in the dream of life together, and her suppers were never her last. She cut her steak, and what does Leoben do, but come down the stairs again. She betrayed him with a kiss, too, but he wasn’t a lover, to pass from her arms. Until she says it, dirtying herself with a sin that won’t ever wash away, because the shape of truth is in that kiss. After that, she could see through the stab hole in his heart the face of it, their child.

Kara could bear faith. But in the end Kacey passed out of her arms, into those of another.

[identity profile] marenfic.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
One should not squeel with excitement this early in the morning. It wakes one's husband up and excites the dogs.

I feel bad leaving crappy, I loved it! feedback but um, it's early dude. I loved it!

Especially Tigh, and this: the ricochet of her goodbye a radioactive orgasm felt a lightyear away
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 04:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I like any fb! I just wrote it on the fly; it's more of a reactions thing than a fic. I had to had to had to make something of Saul's scene with Ellen, 'cause I watched it with my knuckle in my mouth and the rest of the ep was a blur to me. But when I sat down to say it, all the rest came out!

[identity profile] brandil.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 02:01 pm (UTC)(link)
::flails::

Among many other fangirly spastic things cause this, frakkin' rocks!
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 04:57 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! Thanks!
I love your icon. Gaeta makes me kinda pant. With his curly hair I just want to touch.

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
You got to the core of each character here. Love, faith, betrayal and how each is shaped by that.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
That's what I was goin' for! So, thanks!

And hi. hi hi hi.

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Hi back! I am off to see Beck tonight, so I am massively excited. I should be writing but I am a slacker.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Beck! Cool! Have fun! Slack. It's a Saturday.

[identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 07:01 pm (UTC)(link)
He was at the Grden two nights ago with...PUPPETS. If he has puppets in tonight's show you will hear me squeeling.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha! Well, if there are I expect a full review. On my desk tomorrow morning!

Just kidding. sorta.

[identity profile] tinpanalley.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)

Oh, my...This was really incredible. So few words, but they were the perfect words!
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, thanks!

If I have time, I'd love to do something like this for every ep. Because I always have *thoughts* and don't know how to say them!
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[identity profile] ravenwings-7.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 10:26 pm (UTC)(link)
You done good.
(And I suck at feedback.)
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-21 10:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!
Any praise at all warms the cockles of my heart. Because I'm a slut. yay!

[identity profile] alizarin-nyc.livejournal.com 2006-10-22 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
Way cool. You, writing BSG. This is a very good thing.

D'Anna's is the best, if you'll allow me to pick one. I never saw that in her, and yet there it is.

I also love the Biblical tie-in. Wonderful work.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-22 03:01 am (UTC)(link)
Hey, thanks!

The Biblical is weird to me because of course Christ has no place in this 'verse. Apparently I need to research Greeks, Romance, and the zodiac.

I'm glad you liked D'Anna. That one was a revelation to me as well. It took me a *long* time to have sympathy with Six (I do, now, so much), but once I started thinking of D'Anna in terms of "duty"--which is so much what this ep, and this series, are about--I loved her all at once.

[identity profile] midnightsjane.livejournal.com 2006-10-22 08:16 am (UTC)(link)
I love all these, but especially Tigh's, because that scene in the episode was so filled with pain, and duty.
Poor Tigh.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-23 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
Hey, thanks! Yeah, I couldn't watch the rest of the freakin' show because I still had my knuckle in my mouth about Tigh. Really sad, and so well done.

[identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com 2006-10-23 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
I've now caught up on the episodes, so can read all things BSG season 3 and I rushed over here to read your fic, and am not disappointed! This is wonderful! You really capture the characters and themes from the episode. I love how this is like a poem; it has such a lyrical quality to it with the similarities of structure and each final line.

I love how you play with language in this:
He didn’t believe in anyone, not even himself, and betrayal always came with a leggy blonde; sometimes, he came more than once; she gave his cock that stamina.

Wow, this is wonderful insight:
Until she says it, dirtying herself with a sin that won’t ever wash away, because the shape of truth is in that kiss. After that, she could see through the stab hole in his heart the face of it, their child.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-23 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
Hey, thanks, toots!

I love how you play with language in this:

I'm really bad with puns. In that I pun *all* the time. I'm glad you thought it worked here . . . I was afraid it was a bit too word play-y!
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[identity profile] redbrickrose.livejournal.com 2006-10-25 05:48 am (UTC)(link)
Just lovely. You really get to the hearts of the characters in just a few words.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-25 05:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! One of the few short things that came to me in a snap.
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[identity profile] femmenerd.livejournal.com 2006-10-27 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Hi, I'm tkp. I take fictional people and poke, poke them with a stick until they reveal themselves.
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-27 05:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Hi, I'm femme. I take fictional people and make them poke, poke each other.

ba dum ching!
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[identity profile] femmenerd.livejournal.com 2006-10-27 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahahahahaha! I should have an icon of that. :P

[identity profile] leda13.livejournal.com 2006-10-27 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful: your intonation and phrasing are just perfectly in tune with the situation, and very original. And heartrending, too. Very well done =)
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[identity profile] tkp.livejournal.com 2006-10-28 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much.