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More on first lines part 2
Apr. 25th, 2013 12:01 pmSince I tend to be . . . really overwhelming in my capacity for meta, I split all my first-lines thoughts up! So here's part two of thoughts on first lines.
In the comments to my post on first lines, people quoted two first lines I really liked. Since my whole post was about how I didn’t like first lines, it was a welcome surprise, and it made me remember there is a certain kind of first line that I like very much indeed. However, while I love this style of first line, it’s not really always what’s best for the story, so I’m glad not all first lines are like this. ( The first lines were: )
In the comments to my post on first lines, people quoted two first lines I really liked. Since my whole post was about how I didn’t like first lines, it was a welcome surprise, and it made me remember there is a certain kind of first line that I like very much indeed. However, while I love this style of first line, it’s not really always what’s best for the story, so I’m glad not all first lines are like this. ( The first lines were: )